Review Detail of TheShadowMan in DELETEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

The writing is okay, but needs a lot of editing. Story wise it seems pretty decent and interesting to follow Kakashi. His personality is off but that could be easily explained as the soul mergers fault. Nothings explained so far about the original soul, no real world building but not much expected from a fanfic I guess. Overall, the writing needs the most improvement, otherwise it's hard to read and quickly gets dull.