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daremetochoosemyna
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I actually read this story before... It seems as author reposted it. Adding crap chapter to pass 15 k words mark. Such evil needs to be punished with negative review. 1 star for stability of updates. You could just write 15 chaps and release them... instead you copied random crap and boosted your word count. Writing quality 4? I am not really picky about grammar and other things. I don't think it's really good or bad. It's fine. Story development 3 stars. I might be biased because of feeling of dejavu. Character design 2 stars. You didn't put a lot work in design. Mostly already existing chars. World background 1 star - It's fanfic set in default mode Naruto universe. If you show me some creativity in future of the story. I don't mind changing my ratings.

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Mastaaah
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You have read this? Where?!

daremetochoosemyna
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Here on webnovel... It was probably dropped and I forgot about its name but plot and all things are almost the same.

Mastaaah:You have read this? Where?!