Review Detail of Righteous_Serpent in My life as Sasuke
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I couldn't get through the first chapter, it seems for me like the author is simping for Sasuke. -How can u tell that someone like Naruto was luckier when being ostracized from the time he could remember(just read what it does to human if u don't know the result of something like that), ofc I'm not saying that Sasuke had it light, but he had the help to overcome his problems from the whole village, he just didn't want it. -How can the author tell that Itachi is a hypocrite when he has just chosen the most optimal option he could take at that time (he was just 13yo kid at that time btw), he didn't have other options, could u tell what would u do? face the annihilation with the rest of ur clan or just maybe give a chance to live life to his brother, -Itachi takes Fugaku MS and replaces it with Sasuke. Do u know that eyes grow with body ? -Impossible 'sharingun' growth, he is 7 and without any training, he gets fully evolved 'sharingun', when even the youngest Uchiha that awaken 'sharingun' got only one(The youngest person to awaken 'sharingun' is Izumi Uchiha at the age of 5)... -And after over relaying on 'sharingun' he still makes some comments about how Naruto is talentless and without Kurama is total weakling, Idk how others think but for me it seems like the whole Sasuke strength is 'sharingun', only after getting it Sasuke started growing strength and naruto talent is not mediocre or low, he learned Kage bunshin in hours and Rasengan in a week, that feat took Jiraya 3 years, Naruto just didn't have a way to learn something before getting to know Jiraya, after which he cought on to Sasuke in no time. Now please compare author a Sasuke without sharingan with him medicore talent(He really is not genius, idk why people think that when his growth before sharingan was slow, not comparable to likes like Minato, Orochi, Itachi, Shisui, he had resources to grow stronger but only in that time learned a couple of jutsus.) and Naruto without Kurama that was not ostracized and got similar resources that should have as the son of 4th hokage. If u compared let me know ur answer :)
My life as Sasuke
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The discrimination was done mainly when Sejnu were still up. Danzo fears Uchihas, 2nd Hokage hatred was the last Hokage who discriminated Uchiha, Sarutobi did nothing wrong to them, Civilian side awed them, as they were the one founding clan that survived, Hyuugas got rivalry relationship with them so ofc there will be some hate between them, don't see a problem with other clans. U can't say they were discriminated after 3rd Great Ninja War, before maybe, during the 2nd rule yes. But after 3rd GNW there was only maybe from Danzo and his lackeys, but i will say that was rather fear as he himself was quite a sharingan fanboy.
T_Gold:i agree with most of what said but I completely disagree about the villagers helping or even wanting to help sasuke at all. let me remind u why the uchias wanted a coup in the first place. it was because they were tired of the discrimination they faced in the village, the discrimination was so bad that even when they had nothing to do with it they were blamed for the ninetails attack and sent away from the village so when sasuke was the only uchia left he was the only person who took this discrimination. he had nobody to share this with(other than narto bt even narto said in their flashback at the last fight that he they were to mature at the time to try sharing their pain with each other) also not to throw shade or anything but we gotta admit that a large part of naruto's talent comes from his godlike chakra reserves which he got from his uzumaki blood(not ninetails) the ninetails part which is just a cheat code opens only when he runs out of his or is desperate enough to call on it so while naruto is talented on his own the ninetails multiplys that talent.
FYI, Kakashi was more talented more than anyone in history of Konoha. Why did you arrive in the conclusion that he would only be as much as strong as Sakumo when he was more and I mean moooooore talented than him? If not for his sharingan that wasted his potential and stunned his growth so that he could not raise his chakra capacity, Kakashi would have been more stronger than the hokage when the series started! And don't go saying, he would only be as strong as his father or a little bit stronger. Look at Minato, talented right? Well guess what? Kakashi was more talented. Might Guy? Not that talented but look at him now! Kakashi was talented in Fuinjutsu, if not for his lack of chakra capacity he would have been using Minato's signature Jutsu a long time ago. His potential was enormous back then, but all the tragedy he experienced stunned his growth. But the real reason why he was only that strong in the series was because of the sharingan! He does not need a sharingan to be known or to be strong. Because honestly? If the tragedy didn't happen, we would have been introduced with more OP original jutsus made by Kakashi.
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i agree with most of what said but I completely disagree about the villagers helping or even wanting to help sasuke at all. let me remind u why the uchias wanted a coup in the first place. it was because they were tired of the discrimination they faced in the village, the discrimination was so bad that even when they had nothing to do with it they were blamed for the ninetails attack and sent away from the village so when sasuke was the only uchia left he was the only person who took this discrimination. he had nobody to share this with(other than narto bt even narto said in their flashback at the last fight that he they were to mature at the time to try sharing their pain with each other) also not to throw shade or anything but we gotta admit that a large part of naruto's talent comes from his godlike chakra reserves which he got from his uzumaki blood(not ninetails) the ninetails part which is just a cheat code opens only when he runs out of his or is desperate enough to call on it so while naruto is talented on his own the ninetails multiplys that talent.