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I couldn't get through the first chapter, it seems for me like the author is simping for Sasuke. -How can u tell that someone like Naruto was luckier when being ostracized from the time he could remember(just read what it does to human if u don't know the result of something like that), ofc I'm not saying that Sasuke had it light, but he had the help to overcome his problems from the whole village, he just didn't want it. -How can the author tell that Itachi is a hypocrite when he has just chosen the most optimal option he could take at that time (he was just 13yo kid at that time btw), he didn't have other options, could u tell what would u do? face the annihilation with the rest of ur clan or just maybe give a chance to live life to his brother, -Itachi takes Fugaku MS and replaces it with Sasuke. Do u know that eyes grow with body ? -Impossible 'sharingun' growth, he is 7 and without any training, he gets fully evolved 'sharingun', when even the youngest Uchiha that awaken 'sharingun' got only one(The youngest person to awaken 'sharingun' is Izumi Uchiha at the age of 5)... -And after over relaying on 'sharingun' he still makes some comments about how Naruto is talentless and without Kurama is total weakling, Idk how others think but for me it seems like the whole Sasuke strength is 'sharingun', only after getting it Sasuke started growing strength and naruto talent is not mediocre or low, he learned Kage bunshin in hours and Rasengan in a week, that feat took Jiraya 3 years, Naruto just didn't have a way to learn something before getting to know Jiraya, after which he cought on to Sasuke in no time. Now please compare author a Sasuke without sharingan with him medicore talent(He really is not genius, idk why people think that when his growth before sharingan was slow, not comparable to likes like Minato, Orochi, Itachi, Shisui, he had resources to grow stronger but only in that time learned a couple of jutsus.) and Naruto without Kurama that was not ostracized and got similar resources that should have as the son of 4th hokage. If u compared let me know ur answer :)

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