• there isn't any lack vocabulary. sentences/words doesn't feel repetitive. • writting is so fluid, easy to understand • dhruv's dialogues are top tier smart !! • the way you have written all those vulnerable sequences, so painful *chef's kiss* • story was plot driven, I liked that, straightforward rather than stretching it with character driven plot • the reasoning of aman's death and every other dead boy's death was very point to point and resourceful ! • the book is very graphic, in a good way I mean. when Rathod was giving out details about death scene, I felt like puking! • dhruva's deductive skills or may I say your deductive skills ARE SO FUCKIN INCREDIBLE !! • I don't think I have any mistakes to point on !!!
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