The story has a very interesting hook and great world building. My only big criticism is that the grammar is very poor, and the spelling of names and terms can be inconsistent, making it hard to follow. It would benefit greatly from an editor, or even just machine grammar checking.
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LIKEHello there, since last year my friend is writing a book. His book is about bloodlines, kingdoms, and superpowers. The problem is he is not getting any support. I told him to share on a couple of sites but it didn't get any attention. If you guys can check that out and leave a comment it would be really good for him. Have a good day. The book's name is: Wolf Bloodline