Review Detail of Spielar in Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)

The writing is fairly good and the concept is okay, but the characters are all off from the very beginning. He basically walks around and has everything handed to him while mentally being no different from a small child. Nobody who isn't mentally challenged would just say okay and move on when they wake up with missing memories in an unfamiliar place. Not to mention that nobody questions his background to find out if he has a troubling background or whether he is a spy for another familia. It isn't realistic and kind of killed the book for me.