Review Detail of Moose_3565 in Danmachi - Card Wizard

Grammar wise it’s fine. Unfortunately the story just strikes me as fairly idk.. childish? It’s like it’s a shounen novel, but actually written by a 13 year old boy so it’s even more ridiculous. The plot developments feel extremely forced and almost nothing is left up to imagination or is put off until later. Basically everything is force-fed to you in an extremely barebones way, and the writing comes across as more of a summary than an actual story. The only ‘mystery’ that you can expect is about the same level as CN novels referring to everything with pronouns “Omg you dont think thats HIM do you?” “Yes it must be ’That man’ nobody else could be that strong” As for the card magic, honestly it seems like most of the time his abilities take precendence over the actual story. I think it’s likely the author decided to write a story with card magic, and chose Danmachi as the world instead of the other way around. That’s fine i guess but it just seems like some weirdly fetishized story cuz the author has a Twisted Fate kink. Overall it’s not that good, but it’s webnovel so what can you expect. If you like stories where you’re almost forced to turn your brain off and ingest copious amounts of Xanax to enjoy, then this might be the book for you