Review Detail of MooseMans in Danmachi - Card Wizard

The story is fantastic so far since this boyo here (me), has read up to chapter 22 and let me tell you. This story is an actual well-paced FF of danmachi. The mc got some heritage benefits from his mom n' pops which gives him so much potential to work with, either for writing or if you were in his shoes. The characters feel alive including Ais since its hard to write a expressionless character without making them into just cardboard cutouts. Hecc, even the mob characters still gets some reasonable lines to give us, the readers, and the Mc insight into how this world works! The training chapters don't feel out of place and is not some Info dump that you just gloss over. Since this is an AU the dungeon is alive and ever-growing with a confirmed 130+ floors(1000 years ago) from what the Mc parents told him. The novel has some nice references to other anime/manga that some of you old drivers may recognize ,but fear not newbies there was some brave souls who managed to point out exactly where they are from. But in all seriousness this work is seriously well done, with great writing either by characters or the grammar by the author, there is always room to improve no matter which aspect of the story you looking at. My only feedback is the Mc appearance description you could add in just a little more detail about his face and his clothes. But I wish health, luck and inspiration upon you author.