Review Detail of Yui_Kei in An Ordinary Traveler Who Meets Every One Extraordinary

Yosh! First thing first! I read your first chapter and I couldn't grasp anything. (Yes I'm pea brain!!) Ahem I mean... Your paragraph is too long. I got lost. Another thing is your punctuations. Do not hate me! I bare no ill!!! Your story is GREAT!!! I LIKE IT!! REALLY And... and Your chapter title is direct. Please keep it up I will be looking forward to your highlight. I'm the same as you.