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2021-04-18 23:52

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An Ordinary Traveler Who Meets Every One Extraordinary

MIST_VINONA
4.5
1 Chs

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WriterSim13
WriterSim13Lv1

The story has an interesting plot, and while some parts are quite fast-paced, the author still tries to delve deep into the history of the world and other exposition for the readers. The writing is a bit shaky at the start, but slowly gets better over time. Not gonna leave any spoilers, but this story definitely has quite a few twists and turns later on.

3yr

diana_brice
diana_briceLv1

There are a few unexpected turns i have a gut feeling that the wil is not as ordinary as he looks poor wil i hope he wont feel inferior to the people around him looking forward to the next chapter

3yr
Rg_Aiden
Rg_AidenLv1

the story starts off as a little slow but picks up speed around the 3rd to 4th chapter this story has a lot of different characters, its not too wordy but its good.

3yr
Zhang_Awei
Zhang_AweiLv1

The story was good, It's getting better and better in each chapter. About the grammar, I can't talk much. Because my grammar not good also. Just don't give up on your writing. Grammar isn't the main problem, if your story is good then people will support you.

3yr
OwariDa02
OwariDa02Lv2

First of all, I like the concept of dais and lils. I think the story has a great future ahead. But just like what the other reviewers said, grammar and vocabulary needs to be improved. A LOT. Especially for the first chapter since first chapter is where you can get readers from being interested with your book.

3yr
xxSinxx
xxSinxxLv1

Ohhh i feel the anime adventure vibe on this one it's a good one. And it makes my imagination wonder[img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]

3yr
MIST_VINONA
MIST_VINONAAuthor

YES ITS THE AUTHOR I am going to give my self some appreciation for the hard work I did writing this novel despite having a mountain of work graciously given to me by school

3yr
mhim
mhimLv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr
ShadowKatake
ShadowKatakeLv4

The story is interesting and it get better and better the more you read it. I'm still at chapter 5 but I'm now interested in your novel. the only problem is the grammar but it's readable than some trash translations that I read so good job. just use Grammarly if you are having trouble in grammar.

3yr
latteectrie
latteectrieLv3

The story is just beginning, but it's a good start. I am waiting for William's further bloody adventures and hope that chapters will be a bit more longer. Fighting! ʕง•ᴥ•ʔง

3yr
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