Item: Downfall Of The Kings
Rating: 5
Author: OEmilio

OEmilioAuthor3yr

2021-09-02 03:22

My Beloved readers. From the bottom of my heart I apologize for this message but I am no longer going to keep updating my book. It is a bittersweet decision but one that I must make. Between working three jobs, heavy criticism, lack of motivatIon and trying to find sleep, I Have no time to write or update the book. I am so sorry To any one who actually liked the story. SPOILER ALERT To give closure to like that one fan of my book I will share with you what I had planned. Em and Ventus would reunite and defend against the mini War force trying to attack sulpa With all 5 of Quinn’s Disciples dead, the constraints on her true and most powerful follower. He was going to wreck everyone as He was madly in love with quinn and would take everyone out in her name. Through the combined efforts of Lakia, Phinn, Sam, Em, Ven, and SB they would overcome and move to fight Quinn. She tried to wreck them but they whoop her And Em deals the final blow. [Insert Story] Fate dies some how…Had not spent much Time since she was my least fav. Xavier comes in just to stomp on everyone, Phinn is mad because Xavier is abusing his daughter. He gets killed by Xavier but not before entrusting her to Em. Em gets a power boost and all his old abilities back when he gets his soul back. Our heros move to 99th floor determined to kill the final king. They get wrecked. SB sacrifices himself to Save Em and Ven by transcending into the Great Slime God Sir Blob. Round 2 with xavier happens and they overcome him. In a dark twist, the great evil manifests and defeats the Master Of Shadows, opening up the door straight to floor 100. Em and Ven go Only to realize that the final ones to kill are this great Evil Who not only took over the body of the forgotten champion but also corrupted Autumn. After an epic fight everyone dies leaving Em alone and with a choice. He can go home to earth and Leave behind everything he fought against and Betray the memories of those who entrusted salvation to him or he can pick up the Mantel of the great evil and start the cycle again just as he had done so in order for a better outcome. (He was the evil all along whaaaaaaaat) Anyway lame story sorry to have made you read it.

Downfall Of The Kings

OEmilio

4.9

107 Chs

Liked by 1 people

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xAlexiaxLv14

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OEmilioAuthor

Hola, Its the Author. I genuinely didnt know I could write a review for my own book... Mwahahahaha. Anyway enjoy my shameless review. Downfall Of The Kings is a fantastic book. It plays with a lot of ideas and topics that have already been established within the fantasy community. While the book is certainly inspired by many of these, I can assure you, its defenitly unique in its own right. Prepare for a lot of twists, turns and snarky stupidity. Honestly would You expect anything less? The main character is modeled after me you know. The writing at the beginning is very rough so bear with me please. I think the quality seems to be getting better... I dont really know but its a lot easier to write now. [Insert Awkward Laugh Here] Anyway Im sure I have bored you by now with this Review. Go out There and read my book!!!!!!!! Please... Sorry for the exclamation points, I didn’t mean to yell at you, I was just excited. Thank you for all your continued support!!!!

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Mel_AnivLv4

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE None, the author was a better writer compared to me! Haha.

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eyaggelia146Lv2

Well done. I have read a few stories that are inspired by games structures but this is the first that has a well-thought plot with a flow and suspense without relying too much on game characteristics. Keep writing and best of luck

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I usually dislike novels where they do a needlessly long piece of why so and so is re-incarnating, going back in time or some such. However, this is the correct way of beginning with the past, all the relevant content, betrayal and in a single chapter. For one, this story is made of my favorite tropes, so I could only like it... that said, the writing definitely picks up from second chapter, and it's easy to read and entertaining. One could almost see what's happening in the minds-eye. Well done. I think I found a keeper... How about you?

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foxyashLv3

I'm so speechless only 35 reviews and 257 viewers...wow I'm so jealous now. I wish I could also write such a stupendously fantabolous work...I'm amazed and so so jealous please give me some of your brain hehe. I'm Amazed Kudos ☺️☺️

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Sheefta_NazLv4

I am not sure if I am even qualified to review because the author here is really really good. I just started by reading a few chapters to give it a go and the whole time it got me craving for more. I will be back to read from the first again when I start my break. This deserves an undivided focus to read. At least I believe so ^^

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Mel_AnivLv4

This novel was so lit that I got chills! So freakin good and so awesome! More power to the writer's works and More inspiration to the creativity and imagination. All in all, a good read! Kudos and Peace ✌️

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One of the best novels I have read on the site so far. Also one of the only novels with the comedy tag that actually made me giggle. I love every word I have read so far, and the witty dialogue is incredibly fun. I would die for Sir Blob, don't kill or leave him or I will drop instantly. Not really though it's too good so far. Time to play with slime.

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