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Sarah_Lawart
Sarah_LawartLv103yr
2022-01-10 13:37

(Everything said here was without any prejudice, I'm just really curious...) I loved the story, it's very rare to find female protagonists mainly in fanfictions like this, and I really like how it shows what a traumatized mind really is, especially the insecurities. I love the representation of a mute person and how it is. One thing that bothers me though is why she has a weaker soul, does she have less magic?! One thing that bothers me too is, is she going to get revenge on the people who tortured her? I also want to know if she's going to start trying to get rid of the rune that keeps her from talking, like I love the representation of mute people and what it's like on a daily basis, but that's kind of a holdover from her past where she is tortured, so maybe after a lot of studying she can finally let go of it? Maybe if she sucked the magic out of the rune it would cause it to be deactivated?

Catlyn Ollivander (Harry Potter)

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RunningOnJava
RunningOnJavaLv13

In the endless sea of Harry Potter fan fiction lies one that differs from the rest. One that breaks the mold with a character that isn’t all knowing, bombastic, but shows true quality in the mind of a traumatized mind. A character that can analyse the situation and act upon their findings. A figure that mirrors a true mind in situations unfamiliar to their memories. And above all, her name is Catlyn Ollivander.

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homeofthelostqueen
homeofthelostqueenLv2

PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP LOVE IT AND NEED MORE[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
MagnusGrey
MagnusGreyLv3

I have to say this is such a unique story. Seriously it is a concept that is quite cool and I feel Luna would be great friends with her.

4yr
Foxes_R_Cool
Foxes_R_CoolLv2

It has a unique concept that I, personally, enjoy a lot. The upload rate dipped for a month but came back so that would be the only problem I had but the writing quality alone overrides that.

4yr
QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcasticLv4

I really enjoy this book due to how it portrays it's characters accurately, Except a few points with the main character, first 30 chapters are basically just the mc getting hammered with panic attacks, lack of self esteem, being victimized all around, flashbacks of abuse. I really do know that it builds the character, but it's very overdone in this case, and close to everything that happens around the mc is about the mc herself, like her magic limitations, the lack of the ability to talk, and due to that everything around her becomes much harder to interact with. It somewhat feels like walking in mud for a prolonged amount of time, while there's the option to not to. Still rated accordingly, just stated my opinion. Nothing else. Book is great, just wish there were more of these :)

2yr
PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4

Can someone explain me what happened at the end of the Third volume? what did Voldemort do to the MC? what happened next? are there missing chapter? because it's too strange...

2yr
William_Legge
William_LeggeLv11

i love this story. I enjoy how it highlights Harry Potter's flaws. it changes how you see him. I also like Catlyn and how she was more involved in the schools secrets then Harry. I know that it's far of in the timelines future from now but I can't wait to see what you do with the goblet of fire. however I hope you take your time to make the best story you can. take as much time as you need, take brakes when needed. if I know one thing adding to much pressure slows work. so make sure that above all you are having fun and happy with your story. thank you for your wonderful spin on a already wonderful story.

2yr
James_Roberson
James_RobersonLv15

An awesome story with unique character and all the ups and downs you could want a bit rough on chapter transitions but all in all a great fanfic well done

3yr
Mattybleu
MattybleuLv2

What a beautiful story! If you’re looking for a unique HP fanfic, that doesnt involve a prideful, op mc, this is a good one. Not to mention, it has non-verbal representation!

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