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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv43yr
2021-02-10 11:44

Nice writing quality, the author managed to describe the scenes vividly. Even though it was hard to describe it. I know the author poured his all on this one, worthy of my praise! Good luck and may you be blessed brother!

Vanguard: A World for Gamers, By Gamers.

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

BTW, please vote my work The Grandmaster's Rebirth okay? Tomorrow if you don't have power stones now. If you have something to spare...............

3yr
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Second review here! Nice plot! I am on edge everytime the chapters ends. It was very good for my own taste and I hope this will get popular soon. Good luck with your success!

3yr

calfikydra
calfikydraLv10

Im not really into the whole “gaming” genre, so this will be an objective review. The writing quality is good, and the author is very good at describing the settings that takes place around the MC. Its also a very creative plot. My only advise would be, to practice how to write the dialogues, as i feel like theres a lot of “he said, she said” moments. But overall, a great read! Keep up the good work! ❤️

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Primate
PrimateLv4

Writing Quality: Good quality. Few noticeable error that didn't affect the flow of the story. 4.5/5 Updating Stability: Although only few chapters released, can't complain much about this. Knowing the intense stress that comes with writing, I commend the author. But more updates are needed. 5/5 Story Development: The story is about the MC, Tatsumi Matsuoka, who was transported into a game world by an intelligence known as Kai. Right from the prologue, the game progresses in a great way. No deviation from the plot. 5/5 Character Design: The characters are well planned out and designed. Especially that of the main character Tatsumi Matsuoka. Well made. 5/5 World Background: The world is well built. It's based on gamelit/rpg fantasy. The use of the fantasy in this world is well placed. 5/5 Overall: A well written novel, although still at the early stages. 4.8/5

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SacredDream
SacredDreamLv1

The first 2 chapters are very interesting, they are a very good set up for a story no matter how you look at it. It's a nice literature, of course some minor tweaks in the writing quality but that doesn't stop a very good beginning from flourish. I hope this novel will get some recognition over the time since the story is for gamers. I enjoyed reading these two. (A little too short for a full on review but still very nice)

3yr
le_shounenboi
le_shounenboiLv1

A good and enjoyable story. My grammar is atrocious so I cannot comment. Your writing style is great and the pacing is good. I'll review the work again once more chapters are added all the best!!!

3yr
shazueca
shazuecaLv2

The first thing I took a liking to was the dialogue, it's pretty well written and has charm to it. The pacing is a bit fast for just the 1st chapter and their are some minor grammar mistakes but nothing major. Overall the beginning is really good and enjoyable. It makes you wanna see what happens next. Good luck with your writing journey!

3yr
ILLYAchan
ILLYAchanLv5

The story is still new and has only one chapter for now but I have a good reading experience. I thought it will be about a computer game but it turns out the main character is literally brought inside the game. There are grammatical errors but overall, the story is really good. Keep it up author!

3yr
angelicdemon
angelicdemonLv11

The one chapter is really detailed! I don't normally read the gaming genre but when l tried this novel, l really liked it. Well done 10/10 from me! Keep up all you're doing :)

3yr
stupidboi100
stupidboi100Lv1

It's a single chapter so not much I can say for now but for the first chapter, it did its job quite well for setting the scene as well as ensuring the characters are introduced properly keep it up, author!

3yr
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