A typical cliche transimmigration story Doctor assasin golden finger check .I love myself one of these however the writing is lazy.I mean you are already using/plagarising the story concept at least put a little love in it to explain maybe her background what kind of person she is .Flesh out the characters a bit.🧐 Stuff like calling the FL hideous and ugly all the time bevsuse she is tanned and chubby.Or implying if she is white and beautiful and marries someone important she will be more worthy.😟 The confused charcter of ML who is obviously just like a story prop. Her breaking open a stone when she hasnt even started training😠. Even the supposed conspiracy behind her sudden tan and weight gain the genius doctor has no clue.It would have been better if ther was a wacky system, Space Spirit or cute animals but we have a drop of water which is as intersting as well water lol😝
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