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So i finally finished mtl-ing this and the ff are the pros and cons that i've seen (personal opinion.) The PROS 1. The characters are really likable; i specially liked the ML πŸ˜‚ this is the first time that i've seen a white lotus/green tea b*tch male in a story that kept on being embarrassed and he's not even annoying, the female lead that constantly wanted to divorce him kept on adjusting and adjusting on when she'll divorce him not noticing that she slowly but steadily falls in love with him. πŸ˜‚ 2. The plot is consistent but slightly slow paced for me ( tho it can be improved in good ways) 3. The FL and ML are not overbearing, forceful or abusing their powers in anyway (not if it's really necessary). They respect each others boundaries that the slowly build their trust. Communication is somewhat a key to this ( thank greatness!!! ) 4. There are many funny scenes that sometimes i can't help giggling to it. 5. Hehe the face slapping is given in due time and those bwitch really deserve it. The CONS 1. there are too many "side plots" like, her biobiological mom is also lost 20 years ago. (they still didn't find anything about who did it or had any clue) πŸ™„πŸ™ƒ The family is so chaotic be it the ML or FL. The clichΓ© one that she's not the real daughter of those jings and was switched at birth by someone. The biological mom gave birth to her when there's a brawl or something in the hospital and ended up giving birth by herself and didn't know what happened after that, she didn't even check if anything was wrong with it, became suspicious or whatnot considering she's from a military family. 2. There are times that the "antagonists" are disappearing for so many chapters and many more are like mushrooms that are sprouting. (Many of them are not dealt with properly or even monitored properly like that one person that ends up losing consciousness and that's it we know nothing about what happens next because that person disappeardisappeared. πŸ˜‚) 3. Why do novels always make the younger sisters a jealous, schemer,wants to have everything that the elder sister have, sleep with her fiancΓ© , doted by the parents and the elder sister always have to be forgiving, generous and blah blah blah. 4. It's really slow paced that it's already 800+ in the mtl and no major things are happening aside from the ML "knowing" who got him into an accident(it's not even sure if she's the real culprit) 5. I hate one of the men who are chasing her, i always end up rolling my eyes because of him and sometimes the FL. All in all this is a promising novel, i just hope that the plot won't go haywire as it's slightly dragging and really slow paced. I want more actions .πŸ˜‚

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