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littlemist
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2021-04-09 02:42

This review is up to chapter 34 of the novel. I ran out of fast passes so it's only up to chapter 34! Very happy about the release because I was waiting for this since I read the synopsis for the sample reads! Sample reads are such a poisonous concept by webnovel, getting us interested and then not releasing the trial read version for months! It's quite annoying. That being said, the novel itself I think has an interesting premise, and so far it's pretty good (but ever since they reduced the number of chapters, it's become harder to judge the novel because there are so few chapters to read). All I can say is that it has potential and was enjoyable to read up to this point. Hope it gets selected!

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I forgot to comment before, but the translations are a bit weird. They translate Jiangcheng as river town and Yun Hao as Cloud Hao. They could just make a notation that Yun means cloud so it makes sense when translating his different aliases/the company name later but they insist on using Cloud Hao? Which is just strange imo. But aside from that, it's not too bad and is easily readable. Nowhere near MTL level like some people have commented.

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