if the story keeps on with this type of quality I'm sure it's going to be one of the best I've ever read in this app. It's descriptive, engaging, interesting, it's honestly amazing so far.

Although I've see the same concept before in another fanfic i find this one to me more descriptive and engaging, I have enjoyed the story so far and am interested to see how the story goes from here

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This is a great story , i like watching the mc Try to figure things out and be more human, also the Author said that the grammar is bad, honestly i disagree compared to some other stories ive read Its great 10/10

Everything about the fic is good, from the characters, to the dialogue and the grammar. Only reason it isnt 5 stars is because the mc is female

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...I don't understand why make the MC a grimm if hes just gonna want to be more human.. I personally can't enjoy this because its like every other MC is grimm in rwby novels on wattpad and pther sites, except some, but if you are into MC being a grimm trying to be more human then this will be a really good read. I personally just can't see myself reading without wanting to drop

(Google Translate) I thought it was very good and it was a hidden gem to be honest, the direction of the story follows in a constant flow that is not rushed or slow, and that really impressed me. It's very difficult to find that rhythm and I really liked that a fanfic had that flow. It's a shame that the story is no longer produced nowadays, I would love to see the continuation. I noticed some spelling errors while reading, but nothing that spoiled the experience. I can't comment on whether the story follows the rules of the RWBY universe (because I didn't even touch the story hahah), but in general I liked it.

Bisa tidak padat dan polos pada MC karena agak lucu nantinya dan tambahkan made grimm seperty pitur tengkorak dan cerita bohong kelamnya terpaksa memakan grimm

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