Review Detail of Rayama in A journey in the multiverse to find out the truth

Tbh, I'm not even supossed to make a review after all, theres only 4 chapters which are very short. I suggest author to proof read what he has written from what it looks like s/he just writes something and just post it, proof reading is also good so you can make your own style of writing or know what you did wrong so you don't make the same mistake later on. If theres any changes like grammar improvement or the story goes well, please do remind me so I can give you more stars ;)