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Akku_Nidz
Akku_NidzLv124yr
2021-01-22 14:03

The story flow is good. I can imagine MC conditions vividly in my mind. Sentence correction is needed. Else everything is good. The story has 1000% potential. Hope to see more chapters in upcoming days.

Demon Jaeger

MagneBP666
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7 Chs

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Glad to hear! New chapter out today!

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Bloom759
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So basically I enjoyed the story so far, the air of Mystery revolving around the ML is something worth looking forward to. Mr Gibbs is a character I'm not sure if I should be angry at or I should give a second chance and wait for his backstory (if he had except the one he keeps narrating to the ML 😅) There were some questionable actions though in the first two chapters of the story 🤔 📍How would a parasite eat through(even though not all) your nerve in a person's brain or the brain in whole and still be alive? 📍His hand got smashed by a Warhammer (it reminds me of AOT 😅sorry about the reference) and yet he still struggles to get free. ~Superhuman strength I guess. As your first story, I'd say you're doing a great job as I could imagine what experiment 69 was feeling. Keep up doing what you do best and I see this being recommended in the future

4yr

GCarre
GCarreLv11

The story is extremely intriguing, with the author giving the right mystery to the main character. Well written and engaging. I hope you continue with more chapters.

4yr
DjxCarma
DjxCarmaLv2

The perspective of the narration as first person is outstanding! It is filled with with complete mystery (I got heartbroken for mc on the first chapter). I can't wait for more chapters to come.

4yr
Anton_Esbensen
Anton_EsbensenLv1

began reading this at five chapters long, and I love them. now I can't wait for more, and will look forward to the development of the ML. Great flow and all

4yr
Anden_manden
Anden_mandenLv1

I love everything about this story it is a good main character and i like how it plays out and i have enjoyed it so far and i am gonna be reading it to the end

4yr
RenPenRen
RenPenRenLv1

It's AWESOME.....And DARK at the same time. I don't know why but it is indeed a story worth reading. I just hope it gets updated soon since the author is doing a great job making the story intriguing.[img=recommend]

4yr
Emarleetah
EmarleetahLv12

The story line is interesting,it makes one want to glue themselves in the book. The plot is very creative,keep up the good work. can't wait for more.

4yr
PaleUnity
PaleUnityLv1

There is little actual world building as of chapter one, however there is splendid character designs and the desperation of the MC is clearly felt. There is marvelous foreshadowing and the story flows smoothly, however the little bumps that happen are primarily due to grammar or verb tense issues. Overall, it is a wonderful novel, and I would ABSOLUTELY recommend this. Splendid work

4yr
Nomed_Forcraziness
Nomed_ForcrazinessLv2

......................................................................................... THe MC is a Mystery.................. Interesting Needs improvement in the updates and Sentence construction CAn do better.

4yr
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