Review Detail of MagneBP666 in Princess Not in Distress

Alright so after having read 2 chapters I feel like I have something to say. First off: - There are some minor grammar mistakes but nothing too disturbing, reading it out loud in front of yourself or getting a friend to read it through might help. But as I said, nothing too disturbing. Secondly: - I like how it starts off with her being captured, but it feels kinda to easy for her to escape like that? I don't know if that was on purpose but that's just my thoughts. And lastly: I like how the mystery about the court adviser gets introduced in the first few chapters, and the king is not a dumb.