Review Detail of Crackgear in LoanShark Devil Guy

Writing quality is pretty niche. Though good details and volume when it comes to emotions and characters. Some tenses are abruptly incorrect or poor. I blame on the lack of english but at the same atleast a good attempt in storytelling. Stability is rather wonky for now as it is super delayed or slow for now. No furthur updates here on out. Story developement is pretty small but seems to prove a very good idea and initiation. Character design is a little flawed, making use of stereotopic archetypes that are constantly used. Having their themes , their motives and reasons are rather awkwardly missing. World background however is pretty reasonably up to its date. Understandable and really in broadcating its environement. With a little more practice, you can get better over time. :D I am proud of your work.