Review Detail of AoiShana8 in LoanShark Devil Guy

this story is very insteresting! I really like demonic theme and if you like this kind of theme too, this one is absolutely your cup of tea! the first chapter is a little bit confusing because of the style you write the dialogue (sometimes didn't have any mark, sometimes using " .. ", and sometime use : like in a theatre script). But it become better and better and the plot is so interesting! Just one, I recommend you to choose just one style as a mark that the sentence is dialogue. It will make the reader easier to read your work. Good job! waiting for more chapterss 🥰🥰