Review Detail of Craig_Beckham in LoanShark Devil Guy

This story shows a lot of promise, with a MC that I already feel invested in, and a plot that started to grow on me right away. As with any work in progress, there'll always be a few grammar and punctuation mistakes to clear up. I find them in my work all the time, and this is what makes us develop as writers. Keep up the hard work, and I look forward to reading more.