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James_Blake
James_BlakeLv42yr
2022-05-27 12:45

The idea of this story is great but the writing Quality Kinda ruins it I was barely Able to get through 6 chapters Because the wrong ting QuaLity made it feel like I had to force my self to keep going and that just made it so I couldn’t Enjoy Reading it

My System Turns Anime Bloodlines Into Cultivation Technique

Itachi101
3.9
57 Chs

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naraiz_ryhall
naraiz_ryhallLv3

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆ - Some time names are mixed and confused gender sentences (like when MC meats FMC it keeps referring as ''the young man'') and some acceptable grammatical mistakes ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ - at now daily update but if you update 3 chap in one week it will be suffice ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - I found it quite smoothly going ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆ - a hot-headed MC. I was going to give it 4 ☆ but in chap11 his suicidal tendency needs to tone down. I'm a little disappointed in it ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆ -It needs some work in my opinion, but you did a good job on it till now... Reading Status: C11 The total score 4.0

2yr

ShatteredMusic
ShatteredMusicLv4

The premise of the story along with the writing quality is good, It may not seem like the story is short since it only has 8 chapters, however the author makes sure each chapter is extremely long. (at least when comparing to a lot of other web novels.) Thank you Author

2yr
NeonPLay250
NeonPLay250Lv4

just blood from the eyes. The writing quality is as bad as it gets. this is terrible. The idea is good but the execution just sucks. Correct the grammar/translation. I wanted to read but the main idea is lost.

2yr
Br4tsch
Br4tschLv14

not recomended many inconsistencies kinda every chapter. Bad writting and kinda dumb Mc the first few chapter where enjoyable but ca. at the chapter 10 mark i had to force myself to continue.

2yr
Atom_Guy
Atom_GuyLv14

This is really fun to read, how is it not more famous. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
skysiam
skysiamLv4

a good read love this Novel thanks for good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

extremely good just wish you gave a picture of all important characters and maybe even a side story where mc meets parents again you can either kill them or allow mc to forgive them but not care about them also please make a way for mc to seal the demon inside his wife.

2yr
iQuazza
iQuazzaLv4

Are you gonna continue this fanfic or did you drop. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
greedy_reader17
greedy_reader17Lv1

good

2yr
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