It’s a little hard to understand. The start is good and easily readable but later on the quality of the writing just drops. Calling dumbledore a lesbian, Veela vails and other such and such. It wouldn’t matter so much if the parts that were hard to read weren’t so important to the progression of the story. It just ruins the story.
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