Review Detail of OgreBoy in Arrakis is a Black half-breed.

Writing quality 2.5 - a lot of the sentences either end in the reader being confused by either missing important words or using words that make little sense for that sentence and I tried to read this but by chapter 3 I was questioning quite a few sentences because my brain simple could not understand what that sentence meant. stability of updates 5 - it has pretty fast updates from what I can see Story Development 4- This part is really good as long as you can figure out what the author is trying to put into words though even if you cant you can usually get the gist which makes it pretty great. character design 4- By chapter 3 I have come to see the characters as realistic except for the caretaker's son who seems to have young master syndrome but he is still more realistic than I can say for most fanfictions world background 5- I always give 5 stars for this on pretty much any fan-fic I read but this one at least deserves some credit since it shows more than just "he lives in orphanage and then went to diagon alley asked man to open door and then went to Gringotts and got lineage test" like pretty much every other harry potter fan fic (yes i know there are good harry potter fan fics but those are few and far between)