Review Detail of PirateSanta in Arrakis is a Black half-breed.

I have only read a couple of starting chapters and it really is an interesting story. The MC is really fleshed out and what I personally like so far is his journey that's described out pretty well. The young age does make it a bit weird but it is Harry Potter so it does not really matter. I would like to read about his family's past, it is quite interesting. A bastard of bastards. The grammar could be better. I suggest grammarly, it would really help, I too use to correct my English. -This story might not be for you if you want a fanfic that immediately goes into or starts from the maagical world