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2022-02-26 00:19

Read till Chapter 23. Writing quality - 5/5 - Good writing quality. Story Development - 5/5 - Great story Development. He started out as drowning in his good life, I had thought 'is this slice of life or something?' then he started showing a power hungry side (mostly to live peacefully with his mother and protect her). With introduction of Ashton, it looks like Indra (MC) and Asura (Ashton) are back. Character Design - 5/5 - MC only cares for his mother and gaining power to protect her. Anything apart from that seems to irritate him. He does not have any true friend uptil Chapter 23. Way better than a Harem seeking protagonist or MC that thinks with his lower head. Updating Stability - 3/5 - .... World background - 5/5 - RWBY world is decent enough for me Overall - 4.6/5.0 - All things said would like to see MC have atleast a few true comrades.

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