Review Detail of mutekishifu in One Step at a Time.
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it is simply a disappointment, the guy is very weak, do not take kenich as standard the author says, but he had no blessing from god and you have about 8, I was expecting more. if you want to read a novel about a piece of garbage go ahead but you will be angry, because the garbage of the author who extends the story as much as he can.
One Step at a Time.
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Wow it hasn't even been that many chapters and he is just fucking 14, do you want him to beat the strongest person in the world at age 14, look I am not questioning your taste but if that's what you want to happened then its pretty bad taste you got there.And he is at expert level at 14 which is pretty fucking strong already.
I enjoy this too much to leave a negative review, but if I were to leave one it'd pretty much be this. -The MC is grown ass man reincarnated wishes and is an SI MC -Was trained by the 2 STRONGEST PEOPLE IN THE WORLD since a very very young age. -Ignore wishes, this fkers genes are the pinnacle of that world cause of his parents -Has SI knowledge and wishes. The MC should've easily be grandmaster lvl due just one of the reasons mentioned above. Make no mistake, I agree with you cause its only 14 chps but its just stupid that MC is so weak despite all the stupid shit he has and how long it has passed in the story. kenichi pretty much reached beyond master lvl in less than yr of training, MC should be easy grandmaster lvl cause he trained for longer, was trained by better people and has wish abilities and cause of his parents [ them teaching and also cause of genes and biology especially this bro...u watched the series u know why right?]. Him being weak despite all this is retarded
leo26:Wow it hasn't even been that many chapters and he is just fucking 14, do you want him to beat the strongest person in the world at age 14, look I am not questioning your taste but if that's what you want to happened then its pretty bad taste you got there.And he is at expert level at 14 which is pretty fucking strong already.
Like I said, yeah i can get why you wouldn't like him to be weak and yeah the incident here he was stabbed was way too much forced,but again all i can say is that i like that he is not super op at just 14 but the execution for that was pretty stupid.Still the novel is still pretty good with good Grammer which does not warrant a 1 star review,at least give it a 3 or something.
amaturewriter:I enjoy this too much to leave a negative review, but if I were to leave one it'd pretty much be this. -The MC is grown ass man reincarnated wishes and is an SI MC -Was trained by the 2 STRONGEST PEOPLE IN THE WORLD since a very very young age. -Ignore wishes, this fkers genes are the pinnacle of that world cause of his parents -Has SI knowledge and wishes. The MC should've easily be grandmaster lvl due just one of the reasons mentioned above. Make no mistake, I agree with you cause its only 14 chps but its just stupid that MC is so weak despite all the stupid shit he has and how long it has passed in the story. kenichi pretty much reached beyond master lvl in less than yr of training, MC should be easy grandmaster lvl cause he trained for longer, was trained by better people and has wish abilities and cause of his parents [ them teaching and also cause of genes and biology especially this bro...u watched the series u know why right?]. Him being weak despite all this is retarded
But forcing weakness for plot is just dumb. I get not wanting just instant OP MC, but the author literally set it up like that lol. What's the point of pinnacle genetics, a wish for talent if he took 14 years to get where kenichi was in 1? Just take away the wishes and genetics then and fine I'll accept it. Like this what's the point of it all? He gave him wishes and a great body but they don't work for some reason...
leo26:Like I said, yeah i can get why you wouldn't like him to be weak and yeah the incident here he was stabbed was way too much forced,but again all i can say is that i like that he is not super op at just 14 but the execution for that was pretty stupid.Still the novel is still pretty good with good Grammer which does not warrant a 1 star review,at least give it a 3 or something.
Thank you for your comment. I also really dislike such contradictory things. Now, if I take up reading this fanfic, then only after 100 chapters and only if the next world is interesting. And I will probably skip the world first. Hn.
Inferno_Vor:But forcing weakness for plot is just dumb. I get not wanting just instant OP MC, but the author literally set it up like that lol. What's the point of pinnacle genetics, a wish for talent if he took 14 years to get where kenichi was in 1? Just take away the wishes and genetics then and fine I'll accept it. Like this what's the point of it all? He gave him wishes and a great body but they don't work for some reason...
leo26:Wow it hasn't even been that many chapters and he is just fucking 14, do you want him to beat the strongest person in the world at age 14, look I am not questioning your taste but if that's what you want to happened then its pretty bad taste you got there.And he is at expert level at 14 which is pretty fucking strong already.
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