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White_Snow_Flake
White_Snow_FlakeLv33yr
2021-06-05 18:10

I loved the book and the story and pretty much everything that you can see in the first arc. However the ml in the first arc is one of my bottom line kind of character. I HATE him. Like seriously. But that doesn't mean I didn't like the story. I actually wanted to skip the first arc and go to the second and hope that his (the ml) character had changed a bit but I couldn't since that means that I would have skipped way too much info and I hate that. It's either I endure (which would give me a headache and a bad mood) or drop it. So am dropping. It was good while it lasted and maybe when my bottom line has changed I can come back and reread it since it really was such a freaking beautiful book!!! ｡:ﾟ(;´∩`;)ﾟ:｡

QT: Capture The Villain's Love

Pinkyprincess
4.5
278 Chs

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Pinkyprincess
PinkyprincessAuthor

I've heard people say ML is bad 😂😂 It's just that.... Let me give you a spoiler. I'm sure it won't hurt. Everyone else, don't see this reply! Actually, both Tyler and ML weren't actually on good terms with each other in their original world. Like they'd argue every time they meet. So it's kinda understandable that ML is being so hateful in the first world. But it's okay if you're dropping. Even I've dropped reading many novels cuz I didn't feel like it 😂

3yr
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White_Snow_Flake
White_Snow_FlakeLv3

Ah no wonder Tyler was always on the defensive and cautious side. I guess even withou the memories he still knew that the ml and him didn't get along. That's interesting. Either way I'll take a break. I probably should read new books earlier than at 3 or 4 Am. It's 4:38 AM rn so I'll just go to sleep and maybe then I'll try to read it again (´-﹏-`；)

Pinkyprincess:I've heard people say ML is bad 😂😂 It's just that.... Let me give you a spoiler. I'm sure it won't hurt. Everyone else, don't see this reply! Actually, both Tyler and ML weren't actually on good terms with each other in their original world. Like they'd argue every time they meet. So it's kinda understandable that ML is being so hateful in the first world. But it's okay if you're dropping. Even I've dropped reading many novels cuz I didn't feel like it 😂
3yr
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Pinkyprincess
PinkyprincessAuthor

Take care of your health. 🥲🥲 don't be like me who's only living to write and read novels without even a wink of sleep

3yr
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White_Snow_Flake
White_Snow_FlakeLv3

Thanks. I'll try not to 😂 tho that's probably harder than I actually think since my brain literally is always asking what will happen next 😂😂

Pinkyprincess:Take care of your health. 🥲🥲 don't be like me who's only living to write and read novels without even a wink of sleep
3yr
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Pinkyprincess
PinkyprincessAuthor

So, here's the shameless author's review after posting 50 chapters! And really, I'm giving myself a 5-star rating 🤣. It's not like I'm bragging or anything, I'm really satisfied with my story, and I especially love writing Tyler's and ML's interaction. So expect more flirting, banter, and crazy scenes. But of course, there will also be angst... And just so you know, my imagination's wild, as I've been told since my childhood. So, I'll be pretty innovative with the chapters. Just read and find out what crazy stuff I've written until now, and you'll know what I'm talking about. So, happy reading!

3yr

TheSuperMom43
TheSuperMom43Lv15

LOVE LOVE LOVE everything about this book! The author genuinely does the storyline and the characters justice in the way it’s written. Absolutely a beautiful book! READ IT!!!!!

2yr
miniso123
miniso123Lv12

I had seen the negative reviews before I bought the book and read it, but after reading it, I found these reviews really unfair😐. The way the book works, the love between MC and ML in each world was handled very well. 💞 The world backgrounds were cleverly written. If only we could see their happy moments in their real life longer, I think it was finished a bit hastily. I hope the author will make us see their happiness with the extra chapters🌸😇

1yr
Scarlettheartt
ScarletthearttLv10

Awesome, fabulous, commendable...Its totally a system story of different worlds all together but still it has it's the unique storyline. It's the incredible storyline and author's writing style that is making this book great. I must congratulate the author for thinking and writing this good👍👍❤❤❤👏👏 I am hooked with Tyler and David. They are so a dramatic couple...I love them. David's persuading for Tyler, I am just getting that sweet smile reading about his antics for Tyler. Wow...It a nice change in the system story that MC is not gotten into accidents, and deaths and from the first chapter, itself story started at its actual point. BL readers must read this book. Your storytelling is remarkable, the storyline is unique, the choices of words are best, the MC and ML both are up to the mark...It is an amazing book. Everyone must read it once.❤❤❤❤😊👍👏

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8oni
8oniLv14

I am falling into another QT novel :waving while free fall: Anyway, good novel.So far so good. Right now I am waiting to see their past~~~ For now, takes this solid 5* from me, I will makes more review as more chapter is added,

3yr
bonn_cinnamon
bonn_cinnamonLv2

Dropped. Terribly written characters— Why is everyone acting without any logic??? No one's even thinking here. They're all dumb. MC is ok (he's also stupid) but there's annoying Male Lead. Look, I like shameless characters a lot (Feng Xiao, Yan Wushi) but this guy right here is just plain annoying. There's actually no redeeming qualities about him, he's just an immature brat. I couldn't even count how many times I rolled my eyes everytime he appears. LOL. Hated it.

1yr
Reader_333
Reader_333Lv11

Hate this book lol, the mc and Ml are so stupid and annoying

2yr
Salsa_Sal24
Salsa_Sal24Lv2

The MC kept saying he will stay away from the ML and FL yet he was constantly being led by the nose. Seeing this kind of MC made me irritated. I had to drop because of his character settings. I want to punch someone whenever I see the ML. don't misunderstand me I really loved the writing style and the thoughts you put in the details, but it just wants my cop of tea.

2yr
Mi_Lu
Mi_LuLv15

It is a cool story with many different world discription...

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