Review Detail of BLACKangelmarl in CONQEROR
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Hi, author here, the things you would expect in my novel. First- This is a heavy kingdom building and war, so if you like an adventure type of novel, then this is not for you. Second- The grammar is bad, I know that. Because I didn't know that there is Grammarly or any related app, I only started using this app around Chapter 50. Although I redoing 3 chapters a day it will still take some time before I can redo all the chapters. Third- the mc's personality is cruel to his enemy and soft to his subjects. Moreover, the mc is acted like a king, even though he already had just started his village, some readers might find that annoying. The reason for that is, the mc already a season king on the game he played. So he took that personality with him in this new world. Third, if this is a harem, still not decided, if this is R-18 still not decided. I don't write on inkstone so changing anything is a little hard for me, so I hope you understand. This is my first book, so I can take all the critic as long as you read enough chapters.
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BLACKangelmarl
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lecas86075:Please add the #Kingdombuilding #KingdomBuild #War #LoyalSubordinates #Fantasy #system etc tags to this novel. Without the tags it's really hard to find the novel
BLACKangelmarl:Here's the tag. #Action #Fantasy #Isekai #Kingdom Building #SYSTEM #SUBORDINATE #Summoning #War
That is still not decided, but maybe in the future chapters. For now, the MC doesn't have a love interest.
LordFangYuan:harem pls
You mean paywalled? If that so, I can not do anything about it, since I can't free the paywalled chapter again. If I'd known that I can't free my chapters again, I wouldn't paywall it on chapter 20. Btw, I didn't write on inkstone so it's hard for me to change anything. Even editing the chapters are a little annoying.
Tsu_Tsu:its good but don't you think the making it prime is too early
Suggestion but if the author really wants to do a romantic plot I don't recommend haram as for how the novel and books build to be a haram would make no sense whatsoever as it is unnecessary but if there would be romance it should be at the end or a build-up throughout the novel as that would work best in my opinion.