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Fendrel who was on 'her' way home after buying a food on a grocery store, suddenly felt something had hit her head and lost consciousness. The next moment, when 'he' regained consciousness. He found himself in a middle of a Forest, when 'he' was thinking and panicking what to do. GENDER BENDER? OR TERRIBLE GRAMMAR or spelling mistakes?
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BLACKangelmarl
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BLACKangelmarl:Wow, you call that one mistake a terrible grammar?. Did you even read my story?. Or you're just an asshole trolling around.
there is just way too many errors, just in the synopsis, who could have been corrected via the use of grammarly or a google doc autocorrect.
BLACKangelmarl:Wow, you call that one mistake a terrible grammar?. Did you even read my story?. Or you're just an asshole trolling around.
'asshole trolling'. Nice author! A very pleasant way to respond to your readers or potential readers. Now be a good boy and delete my comment if you so wish. I mean why do you even need critic I am right?
BLACKangelmarl:Wow, you call that one mistake a terrible grammar?. Did you even read my story?. Or you're just an asshole trolling around.
What does 'FYI' mean? Is that English? ' ALSO 'I'm not forcing anyone to read my story' Is A very prevalent saying by many puny authors. Unmistakably you are not forcing anyone... 'we don't have he/his on our language, that's why it got jumbled at earlier chapter' My answer is who's fault is that hmm? I am pretty positive authors who write in a certain language need to write in THAT LANGUAGE. By the way, English isn't my first language either.
BLACKangelmarl:Yeah sure, I'm not forcing anyone to read my story. Not the one who just read a freaking synopsis and criticize me for having a terrible grammar. FYI we don't have he/his on our language, that's why it got jumbled at earlier chapter. However, in the latter chapters that is already gone.
Uncle_Sheogorath:What does 'FYI' mean? Is that English? ' ALSO 'I'm not forcing anyone to read my story' Is A very prevalent saying by many puny authors. Unmistakably you are not forcing anyone... 'we don't have he/his on our language, that's why it got jumbled at earlier chapter' My answer is who's fault is that hmm? I am pretty positive authors who write in a certain language need to write in THAT LANGUAGE. By the way, English isn't my first language either.
BLACKangelmarl:'For your information'. This is my last reply, I don't want to waste my time with you.image
Just let the author live his life dude. The author is not lazy. He is not very good with English and his language doesn't have his a he/his or something. Complaining but, you're writing English and blah blah blah. Every one knows that they are supposed to write perfect English and a perfect story as good a Bestseller, you don't need to repeat it. The problem is human beings are not perfect and they make mistakes, especially things you are not familiar with.
Uncle_Sheogorath:What does 'FYI' mean? Is that English? ' ALSO 'I'm not forcing anyone to read my story' Is A very prevalent saying by many puny authors. Unmistakably you are not forcing anyone... 'we don't have he/his on our language, that's why it got jumbled at earlier chapter' My answer is who's fault is that hmm? I am pretty positive authors who write in a certain language need to write in THAT LANGUAGE. By the way, English isn't my first language either.
lecas86075:Just let the author live his life dude. The author is not lazy. He is not very good with English and his language doesn't have his a he/his or something. Complaining but, you're writing English and blah blah blah. Every one knows that they are supposed to write perfect English and a perfect story as good a Bestseller, you don't need to repeat it. The problem is human beings are not perfect and they make mistakes, especially things you are not familiar with.