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Does the writing quality get any better? I'm currently on chapter 18, and at the beginning there were alot of mistakes. Now I still see the same mistakes being repeated. Don't get me wrong the story is very intriguing! It keeps me at the edge of my seat wanting more!! It's just the spelling, and punctuation that make me a bit confused at times. For example the Author uses her instead of him at times, and it makes it very hard to tell the persons gender especially when you first introduce them.
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BLACKangelmarl:yeah it's get better, I'm really working hard learning English. And the chapter gets better around 20+.
I guess I will give him 2-3 women since he was going to be a king or emperor. I'm not really into a harem, I still contemplating about it. I prefer to build-up their story before bringing the women to the harem. No, he won't spare his enemy, just because they are females. Well, the mc goal was to conquer and upgrade his village, town, or city by conquering. So there was a lot of war, going on in this novel.
I know its not my place to say anything but id personally prefer if it was just a romance one with only 1 women instead of a harem but at the end its your novel. The reason for this is just I feel like harems are a bit deterring if you know what I mean if I see a harem tag I usually just dont bother with the book and I dont want that to happen because of the potential this has but its you choice I'm just giving my opinion. By the way loving the novel keep up the good work.
BLACKangelmarl:I guess I will give him 2-3 women since he was going to be a king or emperor. I'm not really into a harem, I still contemplating about it. I prefer to build-up their story before bringing the women to the harem. No, he won't spare his enemy, just because they are females. Well, the mc goal was to conquer and upgrade his village, town, or city by conquering. So there was a lot of war, going on in this novel.
I'm also not a fan of harem, but since he is the king I need to. Though, it still a long way, he will get a woman. Since the MC's focus right now was to become stronger, and have a kingdom first.
DivineBerserker:I know its not my place to say anything but id personally prefer if it was just a romance one with only 1 women instead of a harem but at the end its your novel. The reason for this is just I feel like harems are a bit deterring if you know what I mean if I see a harem tag I usually just dont bother with the book and I dont want that to happen because of the potential this has but its you choice I'm just giving my opinion. By the way loving the novel keep up the good work.
BLACKangelmarl:yeah it's get better, I'm really working hard learning English. And the chapter gets better around 20+.
Muhammad_Usama1:hey memer. is it in a game? or is it a world known as conquer?
Muhammad_Usama1:hey memer. is it in a game? or is it a world known as conquer?
BLACKangelmarl:U might get offended with this though, you know the gods.
eso pasa en mas de la mitad de las novelas que lei y dudo que sea de los autores talvez es un error de webnovel porque lei muchas asi y a veces pienso que me confundi y esta hablando un personaje del que no me entere o que talvez confundi el género del protagonista asique tranquilo que es un error de webnovel (seguramente)
BLACKangelmarl:I'm also not a fan of harem, but since he is the king I need to. Though, it still a long way, he will get a woman. Since the MC's focus right now was to become stronger, and have a kingdom first.