Review Detail of Goldenfox002 in I Love Destroying Worlds' Plot [BL]

The story randomly skips parts of events ( without any mention of it even happening). Causing you to double-check if you missed something somewhere. The characters have no real story development, the male leads affections for the protagonist changes within half chapter, because of one tear??? (for example the first world) Wouldn't recommend it, it all just feels like the author is trying to speed run a Wattpad story.