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NilphyAuthor3yr
2021-05-22 08:53

Hi~ Author is speaking here! 😘 I know there are lots of typos and error in my novel but this is because I haven't got any free time to start editing it from the start. I don't have an editor or a proof reader and this author is an Amateur! I would like it if you make your reviews after reading arc 5 and above. Thanks to those who rated without properly reading it made me really upset. My book ratings keeps getting lower and I really want to cry. 😭 I would explain it here right now. The first three arcs are unranked worlds. So there wouldn't be any deep scheme or detailed plot on it. Only the first three arcs are fast faced. Only after the 4th arc begins that the worlds would have a rank. In the next worlds there would be more details and hidden plot hints. I want you guys to enjoy reading my novel but I don't want the others to look down on it as well. I hope this message find you well. I will try to look for a proof reader to help me with the problems with typos and mistakes. Continue to enjoy reading it. 😁 Don't forget my comments/ votes and gifts! 😘😘😘

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NOBODY_BLLv14

hi! I really love your novel and it a super nice read!!! I am in the 5th arc!!! just wanted to ask the ml won't ever have 2 bodies in one world right?

Tanzina_TamannaLv2

In 7th arc and they were twins

NOBODY_BL:hi! I really love your novel and it a super nice read!!! I am in the 5th arc!!! just wanted to ask the ml won't ever have 2 bodies in one world right?
NOBODY_BLLv14

thanks!

Tanzina_Tamanna:In 7th arc and they were twins
NOBODY_BLLv14

sorry, I know I should really read the 7th arc but this kind of setting really makes me feel like my heart is in my throat the whole time! can you please give me a summary of the arc and a bit of the main CP emotional state? also if the ML will merge his split soul into one body before they get intimate in the arc? if that is the case then I really want to read it!!! so sorry for the inconvenience! please replay if possible! also, I am not trying to be disrespectful of the time and effort you put into writing this amazing piece of work, I just am unable to stain myself at the moment and I really just don't want to wait for a few months to continue reading it!

Maria_nLv11

this really caught my interest 👀

Anastasia_AmaiaLv1

author are you really a amateur?. It is no exaggeration to say that your novel is totally fantastic and the number 1 in my heart and the best that I actually read.

NilphyAuthor

Thank you, Anastasia. 🤗 But I am really an Amateur, you can see it from the typos and grammars. This is the first time I writing this book. Thank very much for liking it. 😊

Anastasia_Amaia:author are you really a amateur?. It is no exaggeration to say that your novel is totally fantastic and the number 1 in my heart and the best that I actually read.
Meylicia_ChanLv3

Ohhh!!! Thank you for update. You've totally save my poor mental health. Please continue this novel. I love it so much.❤❤❤

Notty_PatelLv1

how many chapters/arc are there going to be in total? ?

Zogar_GarLv2

do you have a discord?

Nilphy:Thank you, Anastasia. 🤗 But I am really an Amateur, you can see it from the typos and grammars. This is the first time I writing this book. Thank very much for liking it. 😊
NilphyAuthor

Yes, I have. Why?

Zogar_Gar:do you have a discord?
Zogar_GarLv2

I just sent you a friend request, my user is jupex#1610

Nilphy:Yes, I have. Why?
Daoist636076Lv10

author!! can i know how many chapters are there for this novel? i want to read it when its already completed.

Nilphy:Yes, I have. Why?
NilphyAuthor

We are still half way. After the second trial there would be a third trial or the final trial which isn't different than the second but there is a difference which I wouldn't say cause it would spoil the fun.

Daoist636076:author!! can i know how many chapters are there for this novel? i want to read it when its already completed.
Vanshika_Garg_0851Lv1

Hello Author 👋 How many chapters/arcs are there in total

Sha_HualingLv11

Fast update author-nim!!!! I love ur novel ❤️❤️❤️

Daoist636076Lv10

author-nim! i'm just curious, until what chapter is this novel? i'm a little confused about the trial thing ✌️

Nilphy:We are still half way. After the second trial there would be a third trial or the final trial which isn't different than the second but there is a difference which I wouldn't say cause it would spoil the fun.
NilphyAuthor

I haven't decided yet how many chapters this novel will have in total but the second trial would end after the last three worlds including this one. There is still a final trial with unknown number of arcs.

Daoist636076:author-nim! i'm just curious, until what chapter is this novel? i'm a little confused about the trial thing ✌️
Daoist636076Lv10

thank u author-nim for responding to my questions!! i'll read this novel and support u <33

Nilphy:I haven't decided yet how many chapters this novel will have in total but the second trial would end after the last three worlds including this one. There is still a final trial with unknown number of arcs.
Julier_RobertLv11

Author..will it be 12 worlds/arcs each for Hei and Xia? Just like what the Origin told in I-don’t-remember-which chapter😅 Becuz I have a feeling that it would be like that😅

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