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Review Detail of Kaxhi13 in This Young Master is not Cannon Fodder

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Kaxhi13
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Dude/Dudette, this is awesome. I've been looking for stories like this ever since I've read History's Strongest Senior Brother, most haven't delivered and forgotten but you've went above and beyond. Whereas in typical cultivation novels you'd feel the transition from one arc to another till it becomes repetitive, yours doesn't. The transition is smooth and the "fillers" you put in between are very enjoyable. It's not tedious to read at all. I think I reached 197 in a day before I thought I needed a rest. However one critique I might have is the amount of characters presented. I know Xiri, Daoyi, Xia Yushan, the mother, the fox clone,the sect master and even the concealed emperor but I almost forgot about the Dragon emperor after the demon arc, what more about the other characters. Also I feel liked the plot has slowed down a bit in the demon arc but I think that's just me realizing I'm running out of chapters to read. all in all This story is solid.

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This Young Master is not Cannon Fodder

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