Review Detail of Bao_Karen in 想你(⊙o⊙)们

The quality of your chapters are pretty good, it does keep my interest for a bit and I would enjoy reading some more, The development of your story seems good so far but I would like it if you could add a bit more detail to the character surrounds so it would make it much easier to picture in my mind. The same goes for some of your characters it would be nice to describe Mc more and the people that surround her.