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kaboo
kabooLv24yr
2021-02-10 03:30

A very intriguing story! I found myself hooked in by the second chapter. There is so much suspense created around Leo and Ada's quest to save their own lives from the prophecies that I couldn't bring myself to close the book. The author does an excellent job at setting the scene and being so descriptive that I could picture exactly what was happening. I commend you. If I could just make one comment, it would be on some of the spelling errors in the book. You have a few words that are switched up and need some attention with just a little revision. It causes the reader to have to stop and try and figure out what you are trying to say. Nevertheless, I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who is looking to be on the edge of their seat to see what happens next. Well done author!

TRUTH OF CHAOTIC PAST

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CREATIVE_SPACEAuthor

Thanks for words. The chapters are still raw and I will edit them soon. I appreciate that you took effort in finding errors and helped me rectifying them. Thanks alot.

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CREATIVE_SPACEAuthor

Hello Guys! Author here. Introducing to you a thriller and a romantic novel full of adventures and filled with mysteries. It includes a mysterious boy, a mysterious death, prophesy related to it and leads trying to solve the same. Hope you will enjoy. Suggestions are always welcomed. Your reviews will be considered seriously. And dont forget to comment about the story. Your feedback is a key to a writer stories. If you like the story and want to reveal the mysteries please add it in your library for regular update notifications. PLEASE DO USE YOUR POWER STONES TO SHOW YOUR SUPPORT TO US.

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Aeipathy_02
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First, I don't know that I will find such a wonderful read like this. The mystery this one gives just want me to continue reading. And soon I didn't realize I am in the last updated chapter. The prophecy, the couple, and the unforeseen enemy they discovered, I can't wait to see those develop more. I would absolutely look forward to the next chapter. Overall this story is a great read and addition to my collections. Greatly recommended! Great Work author!

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RukhsarQadir
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Hello This book is very well written and the way writer has described every single detail is worth praising. enjoyed reading its first chapter❤️❤️

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Itx_Mahi
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The first line of the Synopsis n I hit the description. A Suspense Creating story which I added to my library with just reading the synopsis. The author is well creative as according to the Name....❤❤❤❤ I loved this novel... Totally recomended to evryone❤ Lots of love to the Author!!!❤

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Light_ray
Light_rayLv14

The very first line of the synopsis made me realize the exact same words written by author-San. What would happen if such mysterious events happen to us?! So, without any thought just pick this Novel and start reading it. Death always brings numerous questions upfront and I can see in this novel how author will pull up the curtain gradually from those mysteries. Keep up with you good work and keep writing.

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champilyn
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Great descriptions, i can clearly imagine the images porTrayed in the story. the story is also very inTeresting. GOod jib author! Cheers to more! ❤️❤️❤️

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Idczhen
IdczhenLv14

Unbelievable, if I didn't know this is the author first work of a novel, I would definitely not be this shock. Although there are some flaws in the chapters, the story flows very well and it's interesting. The way the chapter is presented hooks onto the reader into wanting more.

4yr
Jo_J
Jo_JLv13

Great, original cover page! It reminds me of the escalators at Charles de Gaulle Airport terminals ;) The plot of your story is captivating and the characters expressive. You're doing very well! You don't really struggle with tenses, style, or grammar. It's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well! All the best!

4yr
Khawla_Amini
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I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing.. Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]

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TofSpades
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A truly well crafted work by the author, the writing style is amazing and deserves praise. I was hooked by the first chapter. Keep it up author!!

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