Review Detail of Dominic_Zibuda in The Goblin's Leveling System!

looks like I have to disagree with you. I know about the over generous reward but if it's bad grammar and punctuation then you must be an english teacher! I have been using grammarly to edit the grammar. And I'm not forced! I love writing this so I'm not forced by anyone rather I don't care about what my readers think. I just write what I want to write.

1. I am a child just stingy about grammar. 2. Grammarly only helps with punctuation if it's premium, and at times it may also hurt your work more than help 3. this is a warning review not a hate one

I understand. Your review doesn't show any hostility towards my novel so i won't delete it unlike the other reviews i have deleted. Just a heads up: The system is over giving because it needs to be or else the mc can't handle the demons. the demon lords are too powerful.

good point

You're not forced, the story is...all of your comments and replies read like Google translate so you may want to get a new program or go back to school.

Unlike every other decently written system where the MC actually has to follow a thought out and engaging plot line to earn their power to defeat the BBEG, you just give it all away as quick as you can. Written like he's some Hacker putting in cheat codes. Just give God Mode and end the story saying your MC is the best since there's no story to tell.