Review Detail of IanzskI in The Goblin's Leveling System!
Review detail
I'll be honest to you author the story sacrificed character and world building to be a fast paced leveling and power ups the synopsis, prologue, and reason are all just tropes. the story is full of cliches which is not bad if used correctly but every character in your story are all 1 dimensional as I'm currently reading so to those who want to read this you need to turn off your brain to enjoy it think of the mc as you playing a character in a game not a character in a story.
The Goblin's Leveling System!
ShadowKatake
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Thanks for the honest review. I'm gonna answer this in the MC's perspective. If you happen to be teleported in a foreign world where danger is omnipresent, what will you do first? Of course our mc would do is to become stronger. He doesn't want to waste his time socializing and focus on leveling first. That's what he think as a genius and he thinks that doing other things that won't benefit him is just a bother. The first volume of this novel is just a preparation for the mc to face so that he can face anyone who will stand in his way. But I'll make the second volume a little more unique. So when the time comes the mc is facing a strong opponent, he can at least fight him without dying. If I don't do this in the first volume then when an enemy approaches the mc, it's not like I can make him use forbidden techniques like in some cultivation novels, right? so if ever the mc is in danger, he can use the power he earned through leveling. Character development and world building will be focused on the second volume.
I'll be looking forward to the ongoing chapters then, and i comment in some chapters if I feel there something I find new or there is a progress in the story telling.
ShadowKatake:Thanks for the honest review. I'm gonna answer this in the MC's perspective. If you happen to be teleported in a foreign world where danger is omnipresent, what will you do first? Of course our mc would do is to become stronger. He doesn't want to waste his time socializing and focus on leveling first. That's what he think as a genius and he thinks that doing other things that won't benefit him is just a bother. The first volume of this novel is just a preparation for the mc to face so that he can face anyone who will stand in his way. But I'll make the second volume a little more unique. So when the time comes the mc is facing a strong opponent, he can at least fight him without dying. If I don't do this in the first volume then when an enemy approaches the mc, it's not like I can make him use forbidden techniques like in some cultivation novels, right? so if ever the mc is in danger, he can use the power he earned through leveling. Character development and world building will be focused on the second volume.
ShadowKatake:Thanks for the honest review. I'm gonna answer this in the MC's perspective. If you happen to be teleported in a foreign world where danger is omnipresent, what will you do first? Of course our mc would do is to become stronger. He doesn't want to waste his time socializing and focus on leveling first. That's what he think as a genius and he thinks that doing other things that won't benefit him is just a bother. The first volume of this novel is just a preparation for the mc to face so that he can face anyone who will stand in his way. But I'll make the second volume a little more unique. So when the time comes the mc is facing a strong opponent, he can at least fight him without dying. If I don't do this in the first volume then when an enemy approaches the mc, it's not like I can make him use forbidden techniques like in some cultivation novels, right? so if ever the mc is in danger, he can use the power he earned through leveling. Character development and world building will be focused on the second volume.
_ReAdEr_:Now I want to ask you the most important question, is it Harem?
