Review Detail of dozkiller07 in Solo Leveling Through the Multiverse

Uhhh i dont know what u read but it said he stole that shadow heros power so he can go in the shadows. That is the reason the police cant find him. Also ur point makes no sense as well, the quirkless were treated like trash and the only way they werent is if they were some super support person like malissa in the MHA movie, so yes, being dissowned for not having a quirk is not surprising and works quite well with the direction the story is trying to head. You cant judge this novel with only MHA as well because it is in the end a multiverse story and we will have to see how it progresses.

dude.u really supporting this wuxia shit now.may be u r fan of pearles martial god. this is democratic society with human rights. u can't just disowned your baby because u don't like it dumb ass.expecialy if u are influencial person.and heroes doing a crime syndicate is ok if it can make sense. but do u thing the syndicate members will scream we are villans supported by hero? no thts plain stupid. he is literally a fat otaku just like us who lived a pathetic life infront of a monier screen watching manga or reading novel.u expect him to be hardworking just because he owned a quirkless man body?no why because if he is like that then he will be motivated before coming to this world.face it he is lazy ass how can u expect him to hard working due to some else life story.why do u care about the owners feeling.i mean you can feel sympathy but that's it no need to do more shit. he is acting like an young master edge lord in any stupid wuxia novel. I'm ok with society being dark to make it more appealing for story direction but make it believable atleast. u just got to this world ruled by power.and before coming here u are a simple human not a leader of a organisation not a leader of anything what will you do after arriving at a world like dark mha expecially the body u got is of an orphan without any support??. u will try to survive,learn and adapt because a single human can't change a society for god sake. and even if u want to do something good for society like eradicating evil and bring truth of heroes then u must become something that society accept(which is unfortunately a hero) did u see how police didn't share what hero did in public? like wise u become strong for ur goal,use paths accepted by mobs to gain their attention,trust and support.and after then introduce ur view points and fault of this society gradually instead of forcing. in these time u can kill villains after capturing them without people seeing.what u doing now is using the defect of society to ur advantages.the police will choose blind for what u did to keep the hero image u have just like that shadow hero.but instead of hating it most of them simply will be uncomfortable and little of them will respect your views too. but our mc simply goes dark mode for some strangers he doesn't even know from like a few moments ago like it's his life. he acts like bakugo in my eyes and not gonna end good for anybody but alas he as plot armour so no problem there.he thing he is acting cool but in my eyes he is using this moment to express his chunni that saved up in his previous world in here.he has killing intent and he kills like people are weed.how can a otaku has such study mind??he killing intent can be experienced from 2 block apart ? how much did he kill to have such killing intent 5??(this is a disgrace even for a wuxia mc as he atleast kill 1000 cultivated by swinging his dick to get that much killing intent) he is angry with some thugs for using their property like they wish? where is any sense in that? u meant to say he has reason for that too? Teachers and doctors watching kids getting bullied and didn't do anything? why because the bullies parents are rich?seriously u want me to believe this crap.U want me to believe a parents trying to make a their kid a villain for future.there is parents who do this but a whole society doing this and yet it still exist without falling apart?can u give a reason for that? the worst is everyone calling him quirkless even the one killed by him calling him quirkless when he literally moving in speed that many even can't see.if this doesn't give u any wuxia reference then u are really dumb. u heard young master screaming " u r a cripple and I should win "and then die by our 'crippled mc'. instead of young master add any villain here and add quirkless for cripple. the quirkless is looked down by society.i agree with that but that doesn't change the fact the society accept people who have talent.like almighty friend who is quirkless but still hold a reputable postion through his hard work(he is a scientist working for hero gadgets I think.i don't know if it's canon or fanfic though)but what I want to say is if society is so dark then the people will already have lost their trust in hero and govt by a long time and civil war will be the senerio tht most likely happen.to not happen that the govt will try to maintain a balance.because no matter how powerfull u r u can't stop a nuke.and to make and operate a nuke u don't need quirk but a simple quirkless human.dont tell me everyone in that socity is dumb enough to foresee this.

No offense but i couldnt read all of that 😅. And no ive never read peerless martial god. Just saying that people get dissowned all the time even today, thats why orphanages were created. I get ur point that he is an edgelord but thats just the charm of the book imo. Jinwoo was a bit of an edgelord himself so there is supposed to be a resemblence i guess. Another reason i like this book is cause i havent seen many good solo leveling fanfics that do it right and so far the author has the system down pretty good

I'm a super fan of solo leveling. that's why pls don't compare sun in woo with this piece of apeshi.t. if u look super rationally sun Jun woo is also edgelord.but he is natural and every action of his did comes cool and feel smooth. when sun Jun woo do it we will feel like that's how it's supposed to be or it was to be expected, I mean he is fucking sun jin woo damn it. but this dude.no way all I see is chunni.and I love chunni that why I'm reading fucking anime fanfic damn it.but this thing is bad chunni.nothing even come close to sunjinwoo.and he doesn't need to be as he isn't it in the first place. but everything he did feel forced for me. the way his world view change.and it changed because of what he heard from a psyco. I mean he believed world is shit when he heard a psyco said world is shit. and my point is why is his world view even change?if anything the dark mha world author trying to build is actually plain grey world which is exactly what earth is.its just because of quirk people are expressing their real face hidden in a facade faster that's all. what ever I'm telling my frustration here because for a while I can't find any good fanfic😓

The reason review sections are here is for readers to rate the book and point out what the author is doing right and what they are doing wrong, you are simply bashing and insulting them. The author stated that they are not trying that hard on writing this, so it is obviously not going to be as well thought out as you would like, and you shouldn't expect it to be. They are doing it as a hobby. If you want the author to improve their writing then why don't you try giving feedback that points out what he is doing wrong in a polite manner instead of making them feel bad about themselves and insyead less motivated to write.

flaws are easy to see when you read like 10 chapters.im getting wuxia reference everywhere and that's a bad thing expecially in a modern japan. I'm not thrashing the author in first review I'm thrashing the readers who has the balls to give it 5 stars even after seeing such obvious cliche cringe worthy stuffs like killing intent for 2 yards or miles or km whatever. and cold eyes that can freeze you when you look at it.even sun jin woo is actually a normal youth matured for his age due to the hardship he experienced and the power he has .but he still retain emotions.if you look at him in situation except fights you can see a easygoing youth who can laugh,become angry and embarrassed, nervous and even shocked in according situation.even he didn't have this emotionless and cold eye persona that for some reason every dumbasses things cools.i was saying where the hell did our mc learn to be this edgy obviously not through the system as I already explained the real owner of system doesn't experienced such radical change.the previous owner of the body is someone with will power but even that didn't explain the killing intent and cold hearted mind to kill people like that.and the mc hi.self is a lazy otaku.i don't know why author even use lazy there if he get motivated so easily.

YOU WHAT?? NEVER READ PMG? I also like Solo Leveling but why have you never read Peerless Martial God? It just doesn't add up. (haha just ranting, do recommend you read a little bit of it though)

Sun Jin Woo may have been a bit of an edgelord, but he only killed, like, 5 people or so. He also doesn't have people crawling out of the floorboards to attack him at all times, doesn't intend to overthrow the world order, and doesn't yell and bluster when facing people down.

what the **** is wrong with you guys. if you dont wanna read dont read. dont act like a kid. this is a fanfic bro. go read other novel if you hate it. u guys are just solo levelling diehard fan. so stop bullshiting this and that. u just want to think u are right. btw his name is sung jin woo. not sun jin woo.

1)I'm fine. 2)already stopped before giving this review. 3)I ain't one.because if I'm I will be die hard fan of this fic like you(I assume u r since u r supporting this shit) 4)I know it's a fanfic.im not idiot and I have enough braincell to know what I'm reading. 5)already did.what? u thought I'm still reading this shit? 6)yes I'm. y do u think I pick this fic to read? looks like u have some problem with your braincells why don't u check if u have any left in your skull,if there is then delete them.u won't need it anyway. 7)what bullshit?is it about wuxia part?does that mean even you know it's bullshit and u still like that?u know what add some bs to your skull too since iit's empty now.may be help u to comprehend more bs in future. 8)what do u mean I just thing right?I'm not high and delutional.im right.its not "think right".it is "RIGHT !!!" 9) thx for rectifying and have a nice day.peace✌️

Yeah its just a story for fun, I dont think the author is taking it that seriously. Hes just writting what he thinks makes a cool story and if it doesnt make a lot of sense its because its a... story😮. Also yes you can just leave a baby if you dont want it. Doesnt mean its not against the law or is right but it happens. Anyways dont see how this is that edgy oh shot good people turning out to be bad and the police not doing anything about it makes sense, they have the influence, they have the power and the police cant realky do anything against pro heroes if they have good quirks so it kinda makes sense not saying he couldnt have made it better. It couldve been a lot better in my eyes but after all it is just a... story.

People are giving it 5 star reviews because they like it, doesnt mean this has to be good, doesnt mean it has to make sense. People just like it since its something that they like to fantasize about doing them selves. I am just saying that even though this isn’t a well thought out story like solo leveling people still like it and you shouldnt hate on them for that.

I know.author himself said he is doing this for hobby.but dude u got it wrong when u said it is a story so anything happen. no it's not like that, a story requires a logic for it be move forward.and when the mc breaks the set logic then that means it's a plothole. here the problem I see is not the dark mha world but how author made his charecter. it defies the logic. 35 years old otaku(don't know the age is correct) + a body of boy who faced the world with shear will till last moment+solo leveling system is not equal to edgelord that can have killing intent that can spread to 2km,mc that didn't kill a dog till now killing people like weed.be it good or bad u will feel fear when u kill.mc can use scyth like it's his part of a body.but I didn't see him having a skill like that in system neither he or his body used it before. such things are not small detail.its essential part of the story.and author must need to write how his mc could do the above said thing. killing intent is a cultivation world thing adding it in modern japan is a bad idea. I don't know how old he is before transmigration.but he is defently old enough to know how his world work.and his world and dark mha isn't diffrent.so why is he acting like he is seeing world for first time?again defies logic. dark mha is something I can see is true.but tell me do any hero who is boss of syndicate will ever let his cannon fodders in syndicate to see his face?the answers is no because u can't control a person's mouth and letting ur cannonfodders seeing ur face is bad idea as they run their mouth and expose his real face.(and that's what happen in this fic.even people knows that hero is a bad end.but police couldn't find a hint which is amusing to me) the way he act infront of public is offputting to say the least.he makes everyone thing "touch me then u die" and is bad thing expecially when u r doing vigilantism. these points are easy to note as I myself is not that much of big nitpicker who want everypoints to be clear expecially a fanfic.but these are just disastres plotholes that I can see even when I sleep.so that's why I said there are some brain-dead fellows there to actually can't see such obvious things

what with the obsession in "killing intent"? what do you even know about killing intent? you just read some story that needs to kill 1000 people for killing intent to appear then you already think that is true? besides what logic are you talking about? read seriously written stories to look for logic instead of fanfic out of someones imagination.

u only see that stupid line out of all the replies I said to those ask questions to me? and what u ask is exactly what I meant here. why the **** there is a need for killing intent. and for ur question the answer is no.i don't know jack shit about killing intent.what I do know is it atleast require a real good amount of killing and a will to kill just like u said. but our mc got it like from killing like 15 or 20 so people's.it breaks logic set by the cultivation novel which inturn doesn't even have a feeling good logic.

easy solo leveling super fan, you're so fired up in a fanfic story.

well.its just when I sstates the obvious flaws there are many to complain without explaining why I'm wring.it just irks me alot