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BrainFrog
BrainFrogLv24yr
2021-01-31 10:45

This is super interesting. I had to take a star off for the Quality if only because it took me a little bit to get acclimated to the way that the author tells the story. Once I was able to follow the way that the author was telling it, this was a really wild ride. I found myself continuing to scroll through each page with an almost child-like wonder. Very interesting and a fun story idea!

Ideas for DayDreaming

GenXPrays
4.8
21 Chs

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GenXPrays
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I would appreciate if you forwarded this review to the OFFICIAL VERSION (Non-Exclusive Contract): https://***.webnovel.com/book/ideas-that-when-dreaming-awaken!_19254407606949905 Thanks!

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Gaureeey
GaureeeyLv1

A GREAT CHILDRENS BOOK FOR SURE, i wish it could be animated aghhhhhh because its like something id love watching on discovery kids or something, intriguing but easy to understand concepts, truly impressed ! hehe. HOWEVER IM GONNA REVIEW IT FROM AN IMAGINATIVE CHILD'S POV SO I GIVE IT A 5.5/5.

4yr

GenXPrays
GenXPraysAuthor

Quoting: "A GREAT KIDS BOOK FOR SURE, I wish it could be animated aghhhhhh because it's like something I love to see on Discovery Kids or something, intriguing but easy to understand concepts, really impressed! Hehe. HOWEVER I'M GOING TO REVIEW IT FROM THE POV OF AN IMAGINATIVE CHILD, SO GIVE HIM A 5.5 / 5. " When I began, in December 2020, to write the book: Ideas, que al dream: Awake! I did it as a short story (by adding chapters it extended to 4667 words, in Spanish), The story has videos on YouTube and texts, game dynamics, songs and illustrations on Wattpad: https://***.wattpad.com/story/247417842-m%C3%A1ndalas-ideas-que-al-so%C3%B1ar-%C2%A1despiertan. The Ideas Book: Where a father (Charly), an expert in technology, frees the social confinement produced by the first wave of Covid, through a reflection on virtuality; and who, in order to have better conclusions about their arguments, proposes to rehearse in their family environment, for this they provide didactic tools "since his wife (Carini) is an expert in teaching and that both are committed to the training of their daughters: Danay and Vicky). " It is in the same Wattpad, where I conceived the idea of ​​making a novel based on the story. However, other activities distracted me from that purpose. Finally, upon being invited to WebNovel by Editora May, as of 01/29/2021, 13 chapters and approximately 22,000 words have been written. And if one day having adequate funding (I hope it is for Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/genxconectados) The Comic or WebToon of the book will be made ... meanwhile I am designing the characters and some scenarios, as well as I rewrite the English version on webNovel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/ideas-that-when-dreaming-awaken!_19064100005118705 I wanted to be extensive in my response to your review because it deserves it and I would like to send via WhatsApp, Email or other means a Fan Art as a sign of gratitude, this in format: PDF, PNG or JPG. Thanks Gaureeey: (REVIEW) https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4314579788?appId=10 (BOOK) https://www.webnovel.com/book/3-hours---a-gamble-of-time._18404695405551305

4yr
Juarez_Culau
Juarez_CulauLv10

First I want to say good work to the author of the book, good idea and very original, I read before pass to my kid right here and she loved the book :) Congrats for your work!

4yr
Leejungsok143
Leejungsok143Lv1

First of all; I want to say congrats to the author for making such beautiful masterpiece. I have read few of your story and it really caught my attention. Gonna read this story to my niece.

3yr
Idczhen
IdczhenLv14

The writing is unique compared to other novel such as xianxia, xuanhuan, and fantasy type. It has a new fresh type of feeling and if you want a breather, this could be the one.

4yr
Yui_Kei
Yui_KeiLv1

*Brain is nowhere to be found* I'm dumb... Your word choice is very unique... Anyway, the story is GREAT and really exercise my brain to learn more. Kids book you say~ Yeah! It'll be great to animate it since kids love watching cartoons nowadays. Love your work! Keep it up! I'll be looking forward to your highlight!

4yr
Aby_jsbbs56
Aby_jsbbs56Lv2

The story us different, intriguing and interesting. Though it needs some improvement it's quite good. Keep up the good work.....♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

4yr
Knightm4re
Knightm4reLv10

The writing system is unique, but it isn't a traditional nor conventional system. So I had a hard time understanding who was speaking. And some unique choice of words. Overall the story is fantastic, the only downside is the writing. Keep up the good work [img=update][img=coins]

4yr
Pearys
PearysLv3

This can be a bit confusing but it has potential😄 If you improve your punctuations especially ", it will be easier to read and understandable! Keep up the good work!!

4yr
Bad_Totodile
Bad_TotodileLv3

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