Item: A New 21 Year Old Her
Rating: 4.8
Author: Earnast5218

Earnast5218Lv103yr

2021-01-29 16:45

way to go. Im a person who easily get lost when the first chapter is not good so basically i am relaying on the first chapter of anybook and when someone had a great first chapter. I mean by great is when the first chapter hooked me i will be able to go to read all the way through the story. nice way on describing the settings in the scene around the character. all in all way to go to hook me in the first chapter author

A New 21 Year Old Her

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