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Review Detail of Luna_Wolf_2576 in Centaurus

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Luna_Wolf_2576
Luna_Wolf_2576Lv133yrLuna_Wolf_2576

this is somewhat good. the characters could use a little more work but overall the story pretty good and some what funny. there are a few parts in writing that somewhat confused because it looked like there were some words missing but when I looked over it looked fine. 👍

altalt

Centaurus

StratothraxAD

Liked it!

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Killer_Skull
Killer_SkullLv10Killer_Skull

hey its amazing do look down on a god or goddess' novel

Luna_Wolf_2576
Luna_Wolf_2576Lv13Luna_Wolf_2576

I did not say that disliked the novel or anything, I just said that the characters need more story to them or more details. plus I wrote this review when the novel had just started

Killer_Skull:hey its amazing do look down on a god or goddess' novel