this is somewhat good. the characters could use a little more work but overall the story pretty good and some what funny. there are a few parts in writing that somewhat confused because it looked like there were some words missing but when I looked over it looked fine. đ
StratothraxAD
Liked it!
LIKEI did not say that disliked the novel or anything, I just said that the characters need more story to them or more details. plus I wrote this review when the novel had just started
Killer_Skull:hey its amazing do look down on a god or goddess' novel