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Good fanfic I'm enjoying the story and dialogue but there is a few problems that stick out to me 1. you mix up the genders a lot 2. the writing is not the best although the story and idea is good. Writing 3 stars, stability of updates 5 stars, story development 4 stars, character design 4 stars and world background 5 stars. 4.2 stars total
Hanma in Isekai World?
Demon_King22
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thanks for the reply! you should probably go back and edit your chapters fixing gender mixups and grammatical errors it would help with new readers
Demon_King22:thanks for the review, yes there are problems with writing I usually look for comments to correct errors
yes, I had just finished correcting some errors (I hope that now it is better) as soon as I have reported other errors I will correct them, now I return to write my next chapter!!
The_Burger_King:thanks for the reply! you should probably go back and edit your chapters fixing gender mixups and grammatical errors it would help with new readers
Demon_King22:yes, I had just finished correcting some errors (I hope that now it is better) as soon as I have reported other errors I will correct them, now I return to write my next chapter!!image
hello Mr demon king do u still work on this novel? cose there hasn't been an update in 3 days and I don't want to start a novel that might have been abandoned
Demon_King22:yes, I had just finished correcting some errors (I hope that now it is better) as soon as I have reported other errors I will correct them, now I return to write my next chapter!!image
Sure and just that the updates are pretty irregular so I upload when I feel like writing and have free time
Deaboro:hello Mr demon king do u still work on this novel? cose there hasn't been an update in 3 days and I don't want to start a novel that might have been abandoned
oh I see well I read a bit of it I think I stopped on the part where the little sister with the dragon eyes came in so far the concept of the story and the story it self is interesting to read but the story had a ton of grammar mistakes I think if you fix those the story will get quite popular
Demon_King22:Sure and just that the updates are pretty irregular so I upload when I feel like writing and have free time
mhm I understand. I'm glad you like it, for the grammatical errors compared to the first chapters I've improved, but I still make some mistakes.
Deaboro:oh I see well I read a bit of it I think I stopped on the part where the little sister with the dragon eyes came in so far the concept of the story and the story it self is interesting to read but the story had a ton of grammar mistakes I think if you fix those the story will get quite popular
