Review Detail of SageOfSins in Percy Jackson: The God of Magic
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one thing I learn from being in this site is that if u like a story from a talented writer, that doesn't mean u may enjoy or appreciate his/her other works.... Perfectly exampled by our great 'cornbringer' who delivered a stunning GOT fanfic but got his head too big and wrote a fanfic that had neither the editting works of his older works or the very relatably characterized MC .... Ohhhh....the disappointment of mine, today is the day a great writer falls...
Percy Jackson: The God of Magic
CORNBRINGER
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author can you give me spoiler if annabeth and percy would end together or are you going to change it.
CORNBRINGER:This is suppose to be a comedy work, Let me guess you dropped ped after chapter 16? Give it a read after that and you will see the main focus of the novel.
It’s still Percabeth, i think, the MC didn’t do anything to change it. Except.... maybe inviting Pennywise into his world ?
Ruben_lopez:author can you give me spoiler if annabeth and percy would end together or are you going to change it.
CORNBRINGER:This is suppose to be a comedy work, Let me guess you dropped ped after chapter 16? Give it a read after that and you will see the main focus of the novel.
yeah I gave it a try after ch 16 but saw only a MC being a M to a bitchy annabeth that seems to be depicted in ur fic... I love Percy- annabeth but now your characterization of the character seems to only bring out a whiny bitchy piece shit and, MC as a boy mouth too big for his head and slight closet Masochistism from the way he follows annabeth. So no I loved ur MCU and GOT but you drop your balls on this PJO Fanfic... Tell me when u start a new project cuz this one is unreadable!
CORNBRINGER:This is suppose to be a comedy work, Let me guess you dropped ped after chapter 16? Give it a read after that and you will see the main focus of the novel.