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2021-01-18 13:27

First review! Will edit this once this story gets more chapters. Your grammar is pretty good for someone who doesn't have English as their first language so I will just put five stars for now. Idk the others since there are very few chapters now, but the character design seems to be good for now. Keep up the good work!

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