Review Detail of CannibalTurtle in DELETED: Please Read "My Bacon System"

I've only read the first two chapters so I can't say much about the plot since we haven't arrive to the main dish yet. What I can say is that, the writing itself is astounding. Every chapter and paragraphs are polished with little to no grammatical flaws. The dialogues flow naturally with no forced or sudden misplaced humor or choppy convo starters in between. It was a seemless read. Simply impeccable descriptive writing. Definitely a 5/5 so far!