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2021-07-29 17:43

A well done story idea! The world is Earth but with the addition of Brovomite, it gives sci-fi vibes. The arthour lights the thoughts of various characters, allowing them to be better understood by the readers. Pointing a flaw, that would be the English. It seems that the Arthour isn’t a native English speaker. But that’s okay, as the story can still be understood. Overall, the story seems good but nothing but nothing can be said for sure as the Arthour isn’t uploading. I sincerely wish that the Arthour starts writing the story further. 🙂

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